Note: Ellen Raskin begins talking about the drafts at 14:32. You can slide the clip in the Real Player popup window to fastforward or rewind the tape.
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First Fifty Pages of Rough Draft (Begins at 14:32)
Raskin submitted these to her editor in order to get a contract. (Chapter One is displayed as an example)
First Complete Rough Draft
After she signed the contract for the book, Raskin completed the first rough draft, rewriting as she went along. (Chapter One is displayed as an example)
Second Draft (Begins at 17:32)
Still rough, working out story and characters. "I showed this to editor, Ann Durell, who suggested I include Turtle in more of the action. Also, she found some confusion between Berti and Mrs. Baum and suggested I make their names more distinct from one another. She suggested I get into the story more quickly." (Chapter One is displayed as an example)